wow those legs r relly short.... and the chest is pretty big, but ive seen worst. and the design is pretty mary-sue-ish, ya know? but other then that, i thinnks its ok, even though you apparently 4got to shade it... the colloring in the ears is pretty cool
There's so much wrong with this comment. I'm sorry, there just is.
-Corgis HAVE really short legs. ._. -That's the neck, It's how Corgis work. Not the chest. -She didn't make the design, So don't blame her. -Shading or no shading doesn't matter. -The design isn't really Mary-Sue. (But this character is male, So it's Gary-Stu.)
And finally: Incorrect spelling and grammar. It could be typos/English isn't your main language though, ahaha.