This has been sitting around for a few months, so just, uggh, take it. 8C Slapped on the last bit of shading and I'm now just calling this finished, even though originally it was going to be a thousand times better. >A>
Crookestar's Promise is the absolute closest to crying I've ever been from a Warriors book. (Actually nothing in a Warriors book has ever even made me all that sad, except for that book X'D) Just his whole mom being a jerk, and uggh. ;;
Before Warriors, I could watch or read anything and not cry (with the exceptions of Ladder 49 and Pearl Harbor, which should be understandable). Crookedstar's Promise had me on the very edge of crying, but I still don't think I really cried there. Now in Forest of Secrets, with Silverstream...I felt like pansy.
I know. The part where he first goes to the gathering and meets Bluepaw, he jokes about his jaw and his name and I almost started to cry because it was like he was accepting his name and his jaw and stuff. It was just so cute. But his mom is a bitch. :/ Just throwing it out there. I really hated how she acted like she'd catch a disease from him if she was near him. And then Brambleberry seemed to like reach out to him and be the mother he never had, it was so cute. </3
Blue this is gorgeous. Im so proud of this XD like seriously idk it just makes me happy for you the tooth, his jaw, it's perfect. i mean sure it's a drawing, and any drawing has room for improvement, but you did a good job on some of the things in this!